(Red Legacy, pt 2) Production Notes

People who’ve read Red Legacy as originally published may notice a minor change in the audio version. Specifically, the line “You think because you gave birth to her” has been changed to “You think because you pushed her out of your cunt.” When I originally wrote the story that was the wording I used. I spent some time worrying about the word. I know how vulgar and emotionally-loaded it is. But Marya is resorting to violence, and she’s using the most verbally violent words she can at this point. Alternatives felt flat, or silly, or weirdly sexual, and I didn’t want that; I wanted angry and vicious. There are some amazing stories out there, fairly recent works by Swirsky and Johnson, that use the word, so I thought it would be OK. But of course I am nowhere near the caliber of Swirsky or Johnson. And those stories of theirs that used the word were not published in Asimov’s. I was politely informed that Asimov’s has a policy of never printing that particular word, and strongly avoiding other less-vulgar but nonetheless still vulgar terms for female anatomy.

Obviously there was no way I was turning down an opportunity to be published in freakin’ Asimov’s over a single word, so I cut it out. But I don’t have that restriction in my podcast, so it’s back in for the audio version. :)


The list of updated HPMoR episodes is as follows:

1

2/3

6b

7a

7b

10

12

13

14

16

17a

18a

18b

19a

19b

23

25

26

27a

27b

28a

29b

31

34

37/38

41/42

43

46

50

54

55

56

57

58

59

61

63a

63b

69

70

71

72a

72b

73

74a

74b

75

77b

78a

78b

78c

79b

80

81

84b

86a

86b

87b

88

99/100a

103

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One Comment

  1. Yes.. the ‘c’ was most appropriate in this instant. ;)

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