I’m not a fan of the confessor’s voice. It lacks a certain… uh… authority, maybe. It sounds like the old priest who gives dire warnings to the hero and/or complains about their lifestyle choices, and, to no-one’s surprise, turns out to be completely wrong.
Overall I greatly enjoyed this story, even having read it before. Thank you so much for your hard work.
I’m not a fan of the confessor’s voice. It lacks a certain… uh… authority, maybe. It sounds like the old priest who gives dire warnings to the hero and/or complains about their lifestyle choices, and, to no-one’s surprise, turns out to be completely wrong.
Overall I greatly enjoyed this story, even having read it before. Thank you so much for your hard work.
Great use of silence at the end of this chapter.