Three Worlds Collide – Part 8 (of 8)

Epilogue: Atonement

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  1. I’m not a fan of the confessor’s voice. It lacks a certain… uh… authority, maybe. It sounds like the old priest who gives dire warnings to the hero and/or complains about their lifestyle choices, and, to no-one’s surprise, turns out to be completely wrong.

    Overall I greatly enjoyed this story, even having read it before. Thank you so much for your hard work.

  2. Great use of silence at the end of this chapter.

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