Got some other random errors to point out. At around the 21 minute mark, Neville says “Please don’t follow me.”, a bit early. And when he actually gets up from the table a little later, there’s just an empty pause.
Heh, uh sorry to say it, but I think your fixing might have made another error pop up. At 21:50, Neville pauses a bit too long, and then your narration overlaps with it.
Got some other random errors to point out. At around the 21 minute mark, Neville says “Please don’t follow me.”, a bit early. And when he actually gets up from the table a little later, there’s just an empty pause.
Thank you! Fixed now.
Heh, uh sorry to say it, but I think your fixing might have made another error pop up. At 21:50, Neville pauses a bit too long, and then your narration overlaps with it.
/facepalm
Yep, that’s my fault. Should be all better for real this time :) Thanks again